Post by conan joseph avery albright on Dec 2, 2011 17:42:43 GMT -5
Ok, so Marsipan is writing a story and she needs you all to help her with it/suggest things/etc. now it is a vampire story with romance. And no, this is completely different from Twilight. In my story the romance happens between two men. Well, young men. But anyway. Pay attention to the plots I am about to SHOW YOU.
The stars are Fox (real name unknown for now) and Mercurus (who is the Vampire Prince in the clan). The evil villian is named Arcurus (who is an identical twin to Mercurus).
Mercurus (pronounced Mer-cure- us. Arcurus (pronounced Are-cure-us)
Now when I dreamed this (all good things start in a dream apparently) Fox was played by Darren Criss (Blaine Anderson off Glee) while Mercurus and Arcurus were played by Chris Colfer (Kurt Hummel off Glee). Yes, I know. This PROVES I am obsessed with them. But I mean, look at them. They are just so perfect together. That and I dreamed this after watching Glee, so that might have SOME factor to it.
Anyway, here is the plot to Book 1.
The stars are Fox (real name unknown for now) and Mercurus (who is the Vampire Prince in the clan). The evil villian is named Arcurus (who is an identical twin to Mercurus).
Mercurus (pronounced Mer-cure- us. Arcurus (pronounced Are-cure-us)
Now when I dreamed this (all good things start in a dream apparently) Fox was played by Darren Criss (Blaine Anderson off Glee) while Mercurus and Arcurus were played by Chris Colfer (Kurt Hummel off Glee). Yes, I know. This PROVES I am obsessed with them. But I mean, look at them. They are just so perfect together. That and I dreamed this after watching Glee, so that might have SOME factor to it.
Anyway, here is the plot to Book 1.
Fox was recently turned into a vampire by a tall man shrouded in the shadows. He is found by Mercurus, the Vampire Lord's "son". Since Fox was turned without a logical reason or an order, he is helped by the vampire clan he is "adopted" by.
After he joins the clan, people start getting attacked by a vampire (which is illegal due to the treaty between the humans and the vampires) and they clan blames Fox, since he is the newest turned and he can't really control his urge to feed yet.
However, there is no way that he could have done it. The reason? His attention and his time were on Mercurus, which the other gentleman says is true. By then, they are close friends. Mercurus is, by that time, crushing on the shorter male. Fox also begins to feel this way.
Arcurus, the evil twin, does not like the fact that Fox and Mercurus are spending time with one another. One, he thinks it's wrong. And two, Fox was turned by Arcurus (we will learn this later). The evil twin gets jealous and starts planning on killing Mercurus.*note: vampires have to take showers in a special type of bath water, not pure creek water. Or else they die.
Arcurus switched the bath water on Mercurus, which leaves him deathly ill. The elders in the clan blame Fox, since they believe he is the wrong doer when it came to the humans being attacked. It is then Fox decides to investigate and, because Mercurus begged his to take the ill vampire, takes Mercurus with him to where it all began. Fox's home town.
So what did you think? I will update the thread with the other plot for book 2. Please, comment in this thread and let me know things like should I add to it, take away from it, the title of what the story would be etc. Thanks!
